Fix typos, formatting, and vague language where possible.

Signed-off-by: Loui Chang <louipc.ist@gmail.com>
[Fixed menu.lst: LiveCD -> Live CD -aaron]
Signed-off-by: Aaron Griffin <aaronmgriffin@gmail.com>
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Loui Chang 2009-01-25 20:37:25 -05:00 committed by Aaron Griffin
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README
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@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ Archiso For Dummies Like Me and You
- What the hell is Archiso? - What the hell is Archiso?
Archiso is a small set of bash scripts that is capable of building fully Archiso is a small set of bash scripts that is capable of building fully
functional ArchLinux-based liveCDs. It is a very generic tool, so it functional Arch Linux based live CDs. It is a very generic tool, so it
could potentially be used to generate anything from rescue systems, could potentially be used to generate anything from rescue systems,
to install disks, to special interest live CD systems, and who knows what to install disks, to special interest live CD systems, and who knows what
else. Simply put, if it involves Arch on a shiny coaster, it can do it. else. Simply put, if it involves Arch on a shiny coaster, it can do it.
@ -46,8 +46,8 @@ system anyway.
You'll also want to create a list of packages you want installed on your You'll also want to create a list of packages you want installed on your
live CD system. A file full of package names, one-per-line, is the format live CD system. A file full of package names, one-per-line, is the format
for this. Typically you'll want BASE and a kernel as a bare minimum, but for this. Typically you'll want BASE and a kernel as a bare minimum, but
you're free to install whatever else you want (this is *great* for you're free to install whatever else you want. This is *great* for
special interest liveCDs, just specify packages you want and gogogo). special interest live CDs, just specify packages you want and gogogo.
The last item of importance is what are called addons. Basically this The last item of importance is what are called addons. Basically this
means any other crap you might want to include on your live CD, including means any other crap you might want to include on your live CD, including

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@ -146,7 +146,7 @@ run_hook ()
udevpid=$(/bin/minips -C udevd -o pid=) udevpid=$(/bin/minips -C udevd -o pid=)
[ "x${udevpid}" != "x" ] && /bin/kill -9 $udevpid 2>&1 >/dev/null [ "x${udevpid}" != "x" ] && /bin/kill -9 $udevpid 2>&1 >/dev/null
#Yep, we're bailing out here. We don't need kinit. #Yep, we're bailing out here. We don't need kinit.
msg ":: Passing control to Archlinux Initscripts...Please Wait" msg ":: Passing control to Arch Linux Initscripts...Please Wait"
/bin/umount /sys /bin/umount /sys
/bin/umount /proc /bin/umount /proc
exec /bin/run-init -c /dev/console /real_root /sbin/init ${CMDLINE} exec /bin/run-init -c /dev/console /real_root /sbin/init ${CMDLINE}

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@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ command_iso () {
mkisofs ${qflag} -r -l $bootflags -uid 0 -gid 0 \ mkisofs ${qflag} -r -l $bootflags -uid 0 -gid 0 \
-input-charset utf-8 -p "prepared by mkarchiso" \ -input-charset utf-8 -p "prepared by mkarchiso" \
-no-emul-boot -boot-load-size 4 -boot-info-table \ -no-emul-boot -boot-load-size 4 -boot-info-table \
-publisher "ArchLinux <archlinux.org>" \ -publisher "Arch Linux <http://www.archlinux.org>" \
-A "Arch Linux Live/Rescue CD" \ -A "Arch Linux Live/Rescue CD" \
-o "${imgname}" "${work_dir}/iso/" -o "${imgname}" "${work_dir}/iso/"
} }

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@ -2,15 +2,15 @@ HOW-TO: Contribute to this help
------------------------------- -------------------------------
This help is rather simplistic. This help is rather simplistic.
In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a text In order to provide help files or translations you simply need to make a
file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The files MUST be 80 text file. Formatting is important (due to grub limitations). The
characters wide, and 23 lines long. Any more, and your formatting will be files MUST be less than 80 characters wide, and 23 lines long.
corrupted when viewing the help. Please note that if your help is short, it is Any more, and your formatting will be corrupted when viewing the help.
worthwhile to pad with empty lines, up to 23 lines. Please note that if your help is short, it is worthwhile to pad with
empty lines, up to 23 lines.
Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the ArchLinux bug
tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org
Please post any and all help files you wish to contribute, to the
Arch Linux bug tracker at http://bugs.archlinux.org

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Installation and Live-CDs Installation and Live-CDs
---------------------------- ----------------------------
All CDs and USB-Images are installation mediums and Live-CDs, All CDs and USB images are installation mediums and Live CDs
which can be used as maintenance and rescue systems. which can be used as maintenance and rescue systems.
FTP-ISOs/Images: FTP-ISOs/Images:
---------------- ----------------
These are the preferred install mediums for ArchLinux. You get always These are the preferred install mediums for Arch Linux.
the actual package versions using these mediums. You can always get up to date packages using these mediums.
archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO
archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.img i686/32bit USB-Image archlinux-200X.yy-ftp-i686.img i686/32bit USB-Image
@ -23,7 +23,7 @@ ISOs with the isolinux bootloader:
Core-ISOs/Images: Core-ISOs/Images:
----------------- -----------------
These are for offline installations when no Internet access available These are for offline installations when no Internet access is available
to install the base system. to install the base system.
archlinux-200X.yy-core-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO archlinux-200X.yy-core-i686.iso i686/32bit CD-ISO
@ -33,7 +33,8 @@ to install the base system.
How to use these installation images: How to use these installation images:
------------------------------------- -------------------------------------
Please ensure the sha1sum matches that in the SHA1SUMS file in this directory Please ensure the sha1sum for your downloaded file matches the checksum
in the the SHA1SUMS file in this directory.
See section in the "Arch Linux Install Guide": See section in the "Arch Linux Install Guide":
http://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Official_Arch_Linux_Install_Guide#Pre-Installation http://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Official_Arch_Linux_Install_Guide#Pre-Installation
@ -43,3 +44,4 @@ For the USB-Images see:
Happy installing! Happy installing!
Happy ARCHing! Happy ARCHing!
- Arch Linux Release Engineering team - Arch Linux Release Engineering team

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# I'm a make retard, there are probably prettier ways of doing this... # I'm a make retard, there are probably prettier ways of doing this...
WORKING_DIR=$(PWD)/.work WORKING_DIR=$(PWD)/.work
ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/Archlinux-XFCE4-Live.iso ISO_NAME=$(PWD)/archlinux-xfce4-live.iso
all: iso all: iso